[Serenae] Kibou no Chikara ~Otona Precure '23~ - 11 (1080p).mkv

Thank you!

Thank you very much!

I’ve just finished catching up. A few small corrections if I may:

• In ep07, I think “Back in Palmier Kingdom, I play a little…” should rather be “I got an instrument from Palmier Kingdom to play…”, because Cure Rose Garden isn’t actually in Palmier, although Otona Precure has a habit of showing them in consecutive cuts.
• In ep08, I think “Nothing has changed” should rather be “It doesn’t look suspicious”, “I don’t see anything wrong with it” etc., using the “abnormal/weird” meaning of 変わった. Technically, Nozomi has seen it up close before (although she didn’t exactly inspect it so carefully), but I think her point here is that nothing is visibly wrong with it, which one might expect if it were somehow corrupted. If she did want to comment on changes, I’d expect the wording to involve something like いつも or 前 or 違う or even just 変わらない.
• In this ep11, the episode title typesetting starts about 2 frames too early.
• And you probably already know, but while you started using the Henshin styles for special attacks around episode 10, they’re still set in the default style in earlier episodes’ v2 scripts. (By the way, special thanks for not messing up the font by blindly copying ScaleX from old anamorphic scripts, as so many others have done before!)

Then again, Otona Precure’s official website actually says (in Syrup’s profile) that Cure Rose Garden is in Palmier Kingdom… But that’s definitely not the impression I have from the anime proper.

Also, in ep02, “That is part of it as well” might be better as “It happens sometimes”, because up to ep11 she hasn’t shown any signs of having other reasons. Unless it comes up in ep12.

Thank you, I've added all those fixes into the final batches! Much appreciated as always!