[Anime Chap] Aharen-san wa Hakarenai S01E01 [WEB 1080p] Improved Subs {OP & ED Lyrics} - Episode 1 (Aharen Is Indecipherable)

Arigatou!

Please let someone more proficient in Japanese do the OP/EDs, these are just blatantly wrong. I was going to point out all the errors but there are just so many of them, almost every line has been transcribed/translated incorrectly. The first line is actually "きっと、果てなく遠い距離の" and not "きっと、果てなくどういい距離の", the second line isn't much better either and neither is the rest of it. Also, I have no idea how you even managed to translate the incorrectly transcribed line to "This must be, a match made in heaven".

Edit:
I did kinda say that I wasn't going to point out more but this is just ridiculous. How did you transcribe "伝えたい" (tsutaetai) as "tsuka egai" and "思い" (omoi) as "wo mo ii", turning "君に伝えたいこの思い" into "君にツカエガイこのをもいい" also completely ignoring the "どうだ　そうかな" that comes right after at 01:30?

@x23 As mentioned I'm not too proficient myself, I have a handful of people that give me hand with the Lyric Translations. We did these in literally an hour or two to get it out but we will correct them as the weeks go by (and if the official Lyrics are released I will most likely switch to those) but all my releases have OP & ED Lyrics so we rushed these out and will troubleshoot the rest of the week. If you're as proficient as you seem then feel free to drop by the Discord and shoot me a message. I really would love any extra assistance to get them up-to-scratch (though the ED should be correct as they are the lyrics that have been released by the band so-far, there is always more accurate ones when the single is released but those are the originals)

Well, I really don't have anything against you, but the mistakes were really bad. Anyway, as for the ED, it's not much better. Since I can't make this too long, I won't be pointing out everything.

The first line "Daijoubu, daijoubu, itsumo doori de ne", here "いつも通りで" is trying to convey something like just keep going like you always have/keep doing what you've been doing so far etc. not "It's always the same". The very next line "Naishin mo kyorikan mo hakarenai kedo" does not mean what you've written either. A literal translation would probably give you that but it 's actually trying to say something along the lines of not being able to "decipher" (going by the show's title) their feelings and the distance between them. And after that in there's a "楽しもう" (tanoshimou; which is not really 2 words) that is more of a "let's have fun every day" than "and enjoy every day"/ "Stay by my side, stay forever, and enjoy every day" sounds like you're telling the listener to enjoy while it's actually a little different. Now, the line after this will be that last that I check for now. "Taisetsu ga shirase de arimasu you ni", here "shirase" is incorrect, the song clearly says "幸せ" (shiawase), shirase would be 知らせ making it really weird, you however did use "happiness" in the translation, so I don't really know what happened there. Coming to the translation, she wants the one "precious" to her to be happy. "Precious" is the subject, not an adjective. So, "「大切」が幸せでありますように" would mean something like "So that the precious you may have happiness" and not "I wish us happiness in our precious lives".

I think this much should be enough. Sadly, you just aren't ready. I appreciate the efforts but immersing yourself in the language and studying a little more will be necessary if you're serious about this. And I wouldn't call myself proficient, at least not yet, I've got a long way ahead :)

@x23 Thanks! I shall take all that on board and make some edits - Cheers!

Thank You!

Thank you.