Nyaa archive 1478438

Fix-Fontsizecolor] Fate Grand Order Shinsei Entaku Ryouiki Camelot 2 - Paladin; Agateram [BDRip 720p] [v2]

Saved on 2022-04-26 08:15:17. This copy includes the description and comments available at capture.

Description

| Source Video : ahan94
| Source Subtitle : heg (Thanks to him for telling me)
| Improved subs by fansubber : Kudou Taiki + Ifeelpain + Seasonal Tea + HadeZerX (it's already been fixed after wrong subs last week ago)
| Subtitle : English (Little official subs together with fansubs.)
| Quality : 720p
| Audio : Japanese
| ED Subs : Yes

Google Drive (DDL) >> https://drive.google.com/file/d/1qF2ji4jYTE2R9qIQjsxGZ0v047qeahSM/view?usp=sharing

Little official subs was founded from someone used CAM HD at theater/Cinema and fansubbers made subs themselves

Comments 15

This version 2 is better subs after version 1 is pretty bad subs.

But if some subs are not good to you, then wait for [KRP] to fix subs (or ask KRP to fix it yourself)

@omnipotent500

Hi. Could you forward this message to omnipotent500 in the thread below? Thanks in advance.
nyaa . si/view/1478438

"The subs used in this torrent are slightly outdated. Since then, I have additionally fixed the dialogues in the final fight and rewritten some sentences in the Bedivere and Mash dialogue at the beginning of the movie. There might be some other changes, but these two are the major ones.

The version on my Google Drive is the final one, and I don't plan to correct it further.
https://drive.google.com/drive/folders/1CxjcPPemSiHPE-QuETU5CwbCQN3F21dO

I don't know if you're willing to apply the styling again to the final subs, or if you are willing to change your subs to make them up to date, or if you are even willing to reupload the torrent, but I'm just throwing this message out, so you're at least aware of the fact.

Your styling and addition of ED-subs are great and I'm thankful to you for spreading this file. I hope you all will have fun with the movie.

  • HadeZerX."

@Heg.

Message to HadeZerX:

"It's fine, I know you don't have plan to correct it but I hope anyone who are good subs that could fix subs anytime.
and
No problem. I found ED subs from YouTube. It's pretty. good"

@omnipotent500 I'd appreciate your work as much as you're entitled to, but I'd also want you to further correct your TL.
Goods subs are made with good translation from the original language. What you're presenting to us as "pretty good" has come thus far as:

01:25:29 [jpn] Douka Watashini Yondomeno... --> [spa] Por favor de terero... --> [eng] Please give me the third...
Obviously, Bedi asked help for the "fourth" time.
01:25:21 [jpn] Watashi... datta... monono! --> [spa] Mi Único --> [eng] My only...
No, the script says "(You [Bedi] are) [someone] to me, to what I once was!"
01:20:18 [jpn] Dewa miseteyarou. --> [spa] Entonces muéstrenmelo --> [eng] Then show me.
No, the Lion King said "Then I'll show you."

Have you and your friends really checked your TL against the original dialogue?

00:29:27 [jpn] Tabi wo shitekitanodato --> [spa] está de viaje --> [eng] passed out.
Hey that's "he's on a trip (= passed out)". Mash only said that he [Bedi] has traveled this far in order to atone for sin.
00:29:37 [jpn] Ie, sumimasen. --> [spa] No, lo siento --> [eng] (V1) I do not feel it. --> [eng] (V2) I don't know it that well. I'm sorry.
A correct TL in English can be simply "Well, um..."
"Ie, sumimasen" and "no, lo siento" are both a filler phrase in Japanese and Spanish respectively. You don't have to translate a filler into two full sentences.

What I see is a lame MTL from Spanish that you failed to check against the original dialogue.
Fixing syntax and correcting expressions from what you know in English are not good enough.
Translate from Japanese, please.

What's with all this 720P bullshit? Anybody willing to upload either a bdmv of a bd remux of this-please?