[Aporiz] Bokutachi wa Benkyou ga Dekinai - OAD2 (BD 1920x1080 x264 FLAC).mkv

sankyu

Subs good ??

Thanks!

@maroon1 I don't know since I'm not native English speaker. But I would appreciate if someone found mistake and editing that mistake for me.

Edit: Too bad.... M/T. I'll wait for a better release.

Hmm you also added kara, this is a plus for me, thanks.

Sounds like a machine translation, no offense. I wouldn't recommend watching this.

Here's few lines, for example:
"But the manager of the lingerie shop, I let someone else be, and then I opened a massage shop..."
"Every day we spend will be a signpost."
"Now, I'm pregnancy"
"The bride really makes I look forward to."

Hmmm these do sound bad, guess he relied on MT since he doesn't know English well.

@Astral I feel sorry if my translation was bad and likes a machine translation...

I'm not going to do it anymore since It'll be getting worse...

This is some of my examples that trying to edit.
今お腹... -> Now, My stomach... (Now, I'm pregnant) - As I see, "Pregnancy" is a noun and it can't be use like that. that's my bad.
でもランジェリーショップの店長は他の人に任せちゃってその後マッサージ店の... -> But, I leave someone else to be manager of the lingerie shop, and then I opened a massage shop...

Normally 今お腹 doesn't imply pregnancy, I would guess it's more like "I'm hungry" but I lack any kind of context. Which is why I can't fully comment on the 2nd line but I'm very iffy on the 2nd part.

@Kumono If it will mean "I'm hungry", I think it should use "お腹すいた".
That's why I think "お腹" is only mean "stomach".

can you share the subtitle file separately?

@Aporiz013
Whilst I appreciate your effort in what you've done, your sentences don't flow very well sometimes and comes off sounding much like a machine translation. I'm glad you understand the 'Now, I'm pregnancy' issue, though.

Let's assume the TL is accurate for these examples, but just need a bit of editing:

"The bride really makes I look forward to." would sound better as "I'm really looking forward to seeing the bride!" (Assuming I have the context right)
"If I'm eating a little bit, nothing should be problem." would sound better as "If I'm only eating a little bit, there shouldn't be a problem."
"I and Kirisu-san are classmates." would sound better as "Kirisu-san and I are classmates."

Admittedly, I'm not an experienced editor, so these sentences could be improved further.

@Ahm771 https://cdn.discordapp.com/attachments/605353312870596609/697084186175209523/Aporiz_Bokutachi_wa_Benkyou_ga_Dekinai_-_OAD2_BD_1920x1080_x264_FLAC_track3_eng.ass

As you see in the comment, my translation is look likes machine translation, don't expect for the quality.

@Astral
Thanks for your advice! I'm thinking what should I do next now.

The subs do seem like they relied on MT but they were certainly good enough for me, it's enough to give a basic understanding of everything being said. Thank you, I'm glad this got translated at all.

thank you

@Beabosaur @Aryma
I don't know how could I say... but if you understand, that's okay. thanks for watching.

My opinion
I already think that I'll wait for someone to release the better sub because my English isn't pretty well. So I'll keep trying to improve it by playing VRChat or doing somethings else.
Finally, thanks for you guy's suggestion!

shouldn't feel sorry about this we appreciate your effort usually no one bother with OVA/OAD or movies at all
i hope to see more from you in the future

@Aporiz013 Unlike some others (like Mushin) keep improving your language skills.

@Aporiz013 I'm sorry but if you are not a native english speaker or an advanced second language one, you shouldn't release english translations. To be a translator you need to have a high language skill in the language you are translating to. Improve your english by posting in forums/reddit before attempting to translate media.

@Aryma @noZA_
Thanks!

@mrhlovesyou
Thanks for you advice! I'll try.

Thank you for your hard work :) @Aporiz013

@Aporiz013
It might not be perfect but its more then enough for this kind of anime. Thank you for doing this,

@Aporiz013 Thanks for the share, do you mind if i try to use your file as base?

@Ahm771 Sure, you can use it.

thanks iill wait a better sub

@mrhlovesyou Aporiz013 made a fair warning that this upload might not have the best English translation. If you don't appreciate his/her efforts, then simply ignore the upload and move on. Given the fact that subs for OVAs/OADs are rare or slow to release, we should be grateful that someone even made an attempt in the first place.

@Native speakers: no offense guys, but as perfect native speakers you could at least help with editing the script and ultimately make the translation better instead of bickering ;) I'm grateful for this release because this way I can watch OVAs/OADs that wouldn't be translated otherwise. BIG "thank you" to Aporiz013.

If you have a decent amount of experience with anime then it's understandable TBH, it's not a very well done sub but it's not ultra low level too, it's decent enough to understand and enjoy the episode.
People don't sub ova so it's anyways great that someone did it
Thanks for the subs @Aporiz013

no decent fansub of OAD2 so i guess i'll be watching this one...